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PICTURE THEORY MONDAY (2nd Edition)
Depreacher
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With The HeartBreaks of 2020 and in the Season of Gifts, HOW MUCH OF A ROSE IS ENOUGH TO BID GOODBYE?
RULES:
1) One poem submission per poet and non-poets.
2) All poems must be 15 lines each.
3) All poems should be submitted as a comment under this post.
4) All poems should end with the word 'Goodbye'
5) Poem submission ends by 11:45pm today.
Winner will be announced on this post by 10:00am tomorrow.
GOODLUCK!
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Our favourite songs have become my forever thorns
I sing the lyrics through tears that wretch my soul
Everyday I wake up wishing I died the nigh before
Every night I go to bed wishing, your love I still own
My days are filled with nostalgia of our highs and lows
The warmth of the times we shared on our own
Every beautiful nonsense is only the former
Even if we have drifted apart into the waters of the unknown
I want you more and more even if this maths I cannot further
Without you I am a wreck left to reckless abandon
What is left of me is useless , even the forger cannot form
I'm like wastelands without you
Even the pain your joy with another causes me leaves me glued
Looking for a sign, hope, something, a glimmer...
But now my love, I must say Goodbye.
The road to redemption is seeming far,
Corona has made it even farther,
For I broke your heart the day I kissed her,
And your soul was broken even harder.
Will the waves rise to help me pacify,
The anger that burns in-between your breasts,
Shall the sun help me melt and clarify,
How I would walk through this raging detest.
But poison rose and walked upon the earth,
To light up lungs and set throats on fire,
This wait for redemption was full of fret,
Engulfed to become ashes on a pyre.
Redemption now sounds more like a sweet lie,
For my boo's soul arose to fall unto death,
Without a chance that I may say goodbye.
El Magnifico el est Magico!
After so much scrutiny carried out by BoomPoetry's team of Judges, results for submissions made by poets for the Monday Picture Theory held on 21st-Dec-2020 is as follows:
REWORD's score:
Mechanics: 4/10
Imagery: 5/10
Figurative language: 7/10
El Magnifico's score:
Mechanics: 5/10
Imagery: 6/10
Figurative language: 7/10.
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Making Poet El Magnifico our poet of the week🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Those who stand in times of test tend to stand the test of time.On behalf of BoomPoetry, we say: "THANK YOU to our participatants".
We are ecstatic having read your creative and anticipate your continuous participation on this activity (which holds every Mondays) and other activities lined up on this platform.
Do spread the word; Until then, have a splendid evening 👋👋👋♥️
Signed:
Team BoomPoetry.
Those who stand in times of test tend to stand the test of time.Wow! I really appreciate.
Thank you judges! 🙇🏽♂🙇🏽♂🙇🏽♂
El Magnifico el est Magico!
Congratulations @El_Magnifico
Thank you @i_am_motmot
El Magnifico el est Magico!